My Timeline我的"大事记"作文

Hello, everyone! My name is Zhang Yiru. My English name is Sue. Now, I’m a Grade 6 student, studying in Tangjialing primary school. My hometown is Henan. It’s famous for the Shaolin Temple. I love my hometown very much. When I was three years old, I went to kindergarten. I had many friends there. I visited to Sichuan with my mother when I was five. We went there by train. It was a long journey. Sichuan it’s in the south of China. It’s famous for Mount Emei. I bought some souvenirs there. I had a good time. Luckily, when I was 7 years old, I had a chance to go to Russia. Russia is in the Asia and Europe. It’s famous for the Red Square. It’s the biggest country in the world. It’s beautiful. Now I’m 11 years old, my dream is become an English teacher. If I could be a teacher in the future, I will try my best to teach my students. That’s all. Thank you.
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　　大家好！我叫张一茹。我的英文名字是苏。 我现在是一个6年级的学生，在唐家岭小学学习。我的家乡在河南。河南以少林寺而闻名。 我非常爱我的家乡。当我三岁的时候就去上幼儿园。我有很多朋友。在我五岁的时候我和我妈妈去四川玩。我们坐火车去那里。这是一个漫长的旅程。四川在中国的南部。以峨眉山而闻名。我买了一些纪念品。我玩得很开心。幸运的是，在我7岁的时候，我有机会去了俄罗斯。俄罗斯在亚洲和欧洲中间。它以红场而出名。它是世界上最大的国家。它很美丽。我现在11岁了，我的梦想是成为一名英语老师。如果将来我能成为一名老师，我会尽我最大的努力去教我的学生。就这样了，谢谢。